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She hears all the other girls
They talk about their boyfriends
They talk about their makeup and latest brands
They talk about their perfect lives

She can't help but laugh at their cliques
The boyfriends cheat for a more imperfect girl
The makeup cakes on and the clowns are reveled
Their lives are as imperfect as can be

She watches everyone inside and out
She notices most everyone has an imperfect relationship
She notices most everyone has an imperfect sense of style
She notices everyone has an imperfect life

She sees her life
It may look just like a life full of imperfections,
But having an imperfect story is the only
perfection you can have in life...
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A poem I wrote when my Internet was down. Thats why it’s taken so long to put it up.
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Imperfection is now becoming the facade of our modern society - all the cliche narrations about fashion faux pas and novoeu riche tastes of glamour are nothing more than fancy ways of describing more money, more power, more fame.

And in the process, they're simply giving away the one most important lesson of their lives: themselves. We are our own books, our own dictation, our own essence. Becoming something we are not is the saddest thing we can do. But if we do not want to accept that - so be it.

Let the imperfection guide us into wearing our misery's crown.
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True! Greatly put :D
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~lifizzell Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha thanks. :)
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~MiugiKayo Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Agree entirely. Great job expressing reality.
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~lifizzell Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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~MiugiKayo Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. ^^
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~NekoWolf95 Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So true! I love how it flows together when you read it~ And it stays real ^^ No one's perfect, and that is shown. Good work (:
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~lifizzell Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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~NekoWolf95 Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome (:
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